New story posted
Sep. 9th, 2006 03:22 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
ariannaI've just posted a new slash, 'first time' story, entitled LIES, on my site at www.arianna.hidden-muse.com It's moderately long ... 61 pages, over 41,000 words.
I have to thank Janet for giving me yet another great idea to run with, and only hope I've done it justice. As always, my thanks go to StarWatcher, as well, for beta'ing the story, and to Rhianne, for hosting my slash stories on her site.
Briefly, the story is set post-TSbyBS and Blair has been a cop for nearly a year. But, when he's the key witness in a murder trial, his testimony is impugned by his reputation as a liar and a fraud, and the case is thrown out. And ... well, you'll just have to read the rest of it!
If you get a chance to check it out, I hope you enjoy it, and I'd sure appreciate feedback!
I have to thank Janet for giving me yet another great idea to run with, and only hope I've done it justice. As always, my thanks go to StarWatcher, as well, for beta'ing the story, and to Rhianne, for hosting my slash stories on her site.
Briefly, the story is set post-TSbyBS and Blair has been a cop for nearly a year. But, when he's the key witness in a murder trial, his testimony is impugned by his reputation as a liar and a fraud, and the case is thrown out. And ... well, you'll just have to read the rest of it!
If you get a chance to check it out, I hope you enjoy it, and I'd sure appreciate feedback!
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Date: 2006-09-09 05:59 pm (UTC)Yay! It looks good.
Suggestion -- post this at
http://www.arianna.hidden-muse.com
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Date: 2006-09-10 11:35 pm (UTC)The part that stayed in my mind the most was the ending. About bloody time Jim did the right thing *g* and I loved how you involved both William and Steven in the story. I think this went a long way to giving Blair a sense of family and a sense of really belonging.
Oh, and I also have to mention the dining room table and Jim’s cleaning fetish – This made
me laugh. (Won’t give anymore away)
Excellent job!
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Date: 2006-09-10 11:54 pm (UTC)I'm glad to hear that your cold sounds like it's getting better!
Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the story, Jess ... ::grins:: I couldn't resist the cleaning scene, LOL!!!! Though I'm not sure it's credible. Not sure any guy would worry about something like at a time like that, but I thought working it in as a kind of reflexive action might fly. And, yeah, the last we heard on the series was that William and Steven were some upset, so I wanted to slip in that those fences were well and truly mended.
Really appreciate your note!
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Date: 2006-09-11 12:02 am (UTC)That's the thing about humour ... it doesn't have to be what a person would normally do. But in this case, I could very much see the look on Jim's face. :0)
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Date: 2006-09-13 01:16 pm (UTC)I did, thank you! Whatever Janet said to set you off, I just hope she does again *g*.
Great story, you had me sniffling in all the right places, plus a great ending.
Thanks again. :~D
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